在译言网看到一个超赞的歌词翻译：Coldplay 那首著名的 Viva la vida http://article.yeeyan.org/view/46756/72221
wb13 · 2014-05-29 14:22:34 +08:00 · 4066 次点击这是一个创建于 3837 天前的主题，其中的信息可能已经有所发展或是发生改变。
I used to rule the world
大千世界曾由我主宰
Seas would rise when I gave the word
巨浪也曾因我之命澎湃
Now in the morning I sleep alone
而今我却在黎明独自入眠
Sweep the streets I used to own
在曾属于我的大道落寞徘徊
I used to roll the dice
凡人生死曾由我主宰
Feel the fear in my enemy's eyes
尽情品味惊恐在死敌瞳孔绽开
Listen as the crowd would sing:
欣然倾听百姓高歌喝彩：
"Now the old king is dead! Long live the king!"
“先王亡矣！新王万代！”
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大千世界曾由我主宰
Seas would rise when I gave the word
巨浪也曾因我之命澎湃
Now in the morning I sleep alone
而今我却在黎明独自入眠
Sweep the streets I used to own
在曾属于我的大道落寞徘徊
I used to roll the dice
凡人生死曾由我主宰
Feel the fear in my enemy's eyes
尽情品味惊恐在死敌瞳孔绽开
Listen as the crowd would sing:
欣然倾听百姓高歌喝彩：
"Now the old king is dead! Long live the king!"
“先王亡矣！新王万代！”
......
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Dk2014 2014-05-29 15:53:24 +08:00 via iPhone
我还是上次奥运的时候听得
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yy1984 2014-05-29 16:05:56 +08:00
说明中文的博大精深，不是英文渣渣能比的
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tanny 2014-05-29 17:30:10 +08:00
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loading 2014-05-29 17:35:57 +08:00 via Android
建议英语老师吧这个出成中译英题目！
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nAODI 2014-05-29 18:49:59 +08:00
我倒觉得这个翻译有点古味，但读起来缺不够舒畅，用词也略显古怪。就像 @tanny 说的中文优美的韵律和意境，这个翻译还达不到，反而显的有点做作。
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Wowbeing 2014-05-29 20:29:37 +08:00  1
发现网易云音乐用上了 http://music.163.com/#/song?id=3986017
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stillwater 2014-05-29 20:39:26 +08:00
sweep the street那句错了吧
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wb13 OP @nAODI 另一个版本：
I used to rule the world 我曾经掌握世界 Seas would rise when I gave the word 号令潮汐 Now in the morning I sleep alone 如今在这清晨孤单躺卧 Sweep the streets I used to own 巡视属于我的路途 I used to roll the dice 我曾经左右命运 Feel the fear in my enemy’s eyes 玩味敌人眼中的恐惧 Listen as the crowd would sing: 听着人们的颂唱： “Now the old king is dead! Long live the king!” 先王已死，新王万岁！ One minute I held the key 就在刚才我还拥有开启一切的关键 Next the walls were closed on me 转瞬便走到了尽头 And I discovered that my castles stand 我发觉自己的根基 Upon pillars of salt and pillars of sand 建立于小信与虚妄之上（盐柱子与沙子在圣经里的隐喻） ...... http://www.douban.com/group/topic/5115680/ |
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wb13 OP @stillwater 应该没错。Sweep有很多用法。具体详见 https://www.google.com.au/search?q=define sweep
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bingowrt 2014-05-30 10:19:43 +08:00 via Android
我第一次听这个歌的时候，是看兄贵领导人民
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stillwater 2014-05-30 10:20:26 +08:00 1
@wb13 根据这首歌的背景，我感觉应该是用目光“扫”过街道才对。
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bingowrt 2014-05-30 11:22:44 +08:00
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